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The New Camper. Chapter one

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    I woke up in my cabin and saw the normal, My pen Riptide and the Minotaur's horn on my side table. The bronze hippocampi hanging on the ceiling. I got up and walked out of my cabin to go brush my teeth, when i saw Annabeth running towards me. I gave her a hug and she said.
    "Come on seaweed brain there's a new camper you've got to meet."
    "Can't a guy get some food before you start making him run places," I said, joking of course.
    "Just hurry! This ones different, I promise."
    I saw a flash of something cross her face, but i must of mistaken it, because she started pulling me to the big house to go meet the new camper.
I followed her down the the Big house and i saw her with two other demigods, the most unlikely two i though would ever be there. Nico Di Angelo, and Will Solace were sitting next to a girl with frizzy brown hair and... Her eyes. Something was wrong with them. I knew right then why Will was there, the girl had gone blind. She was drinking something, probably ambrosia. As i got closer Nico stood and whispered to me
    "Try not to get to close, shes not very stable." He whispered, then sat down next to her and talked to her. Will seemed to be looking at her eyes, i looked at him. He shook his head, and i knew this girls case was hopeless. I asked Annabeth,
    "Why Nico?"
    "I don't know, so far he's the only one who can keep her calm long enough for Will to look at her." She replied in a whisper.
After some convincing from Nico, the girl stood up and put her hand out, like she was asking for a hand shake.
    "Hello" The girl said, not really talking to me, but more like she was talking to the air around me. Her eyes where A pail blue, like a summers day sky.
I shook it, and she grabbed my hand and held it firm and shook it. After shaking Annabeth's she smiled at us and spook some more.
    "Sorry about that, bad flash backs. Now, My name it Victoria. Yes just like the Roman Goddesses of victory, just in case you were wondering or if it helps you remember." She said the last part staring in the direction of Mr. D. 
    "Now, i believe you," She said looking in my direction. " are a son of Poseidon, am i right?"
    "How do You.." i said, muttering off as she looked where Annabeth used to be standing, but she moved next to me.
    "You, are a daughter of Athena."
    "Right again," Annabeth said, " But who's Daughter are you?"
    "Oh me?" She said looking down. " I'm the daughter of Nike, Goddesses of Victory
    "So the Greek form of your name?" I said, try my hardest not to laugh for Victoria's sake.
    "Yep, And if your wondering how i know," She turned around... And a pair of golden wings just like Nike's came out of her back. Don't ask how i know Nike, its a long story. She folded them back up and turned around, she opened her mouth as if to say more, and fell to the ground.
-I'll write the rest if Other people like it! i hope you liked it too, please comment suggestions or such, but please don't just post mean or rude comments about how this is really bad, because i know it is. As this is my first one. Sorry its really short i didn't have a lot of time at the moment i started writing it,but i did spend a lot of time on this. Percy Jackson, Annabeth, Nico, Will and Camp Half-Blood all belong to Rick Riordan, i'm just using them to make more wonderful story's. Thank You, and please don't hate me-
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Okay definetly a very good intro for a new demigood :P but I like the idea of the wings!!!!!